Tuesday, March 2, 2010

LET'S GO TO FRANCE

France is an independent country in Westen Europe, the third largest country in Europe. France is known as a romantic country where many young couples wish that they would have a chance to spend their honeymoon in Paris and visit the Eiffel Tower-one of the most famous places in the World. Hum, I'm dreaming of French country right now. So you know why I picked this country, don't you? But the most important reason is that there are a lot things that I want to know about it. When I asked people about what countries they would like to visit in Europe, most of them said that they would like to visit France because of its fabulous places, polite people, and special culture . My old friend told me that France was the heart of Europe. Since I haven't had a chance to visit this country, I would like to explore it to educate myself, and everyone in my class may want to visit this country from home , too. Furthermore, I might have a chance to visit this country one day. Now, are you ready? Let's go to the Eiffel Tower.
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8 comments:

  1. Emily TouartMarch 3, 2010 at 7:55 AM

    Mai,

    I'm so excited that you have chosen to study France. I have never been there so I look forward to you teaching me all about the food, customs, and history... not to mention all of the fabulous places to visit. Your blog looks great! Good work!

    A few suggestions for you:

    In the "Interests" section:
    . take time with my family

    In the "Favorite Music" section:
    . soft rock music

    In the "Let's Go to France" section:
    . The reason I picked this country because
    . there are a lot things
    . When I asked
    . visit in European
    . they liked to visit
    . because of its fabulous country
    . I haven't have

    Keep up the good work!

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  2. Josué LimaMarch 4, 2010 at 6:46 AM

    Very good choice. I just know a little about France and now it's an opportunity to know more.

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  3. Nicole BachianMarch 4, 2010 at 1:16 PM

    Mai,
    I am excited to know about France... I think it is a very romantic place. I would love to learn about everything there...

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  4. Sabine KuerzdoerferMarch 8, 2010 at 5:22 PM

    Mai, I am so looking forward what you will tell us about France :o))) I hope you have fun telling us.

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  5. MashaMarch 9, 2010 at 7:05 AM

    thank you for telling us about France. It is reaiy romantic place.

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  6. sunshineMarch 9, 2010 at 7:50 AM

    France is really interesting place. I never been there before and a lot of people want to go there.

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  7. travelloverMarch 9, 2010 at 3:48 PM

    I had been there one time over 10 years ago. I'm excited to know about France again through your blog. Let's enjoy it!!

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  8. Emily TouartMarch 9, 2010 at 4:33 PM

    I like your additions. They are FABULOUS! You are a wonderful writer.

    Here are a few small changes (be careful with your articles):

    . would have chances to spend their honeymoon (chances should be singular because usually people only have one honeymoon)
    . no comma before Eiffel Tower
    . There is only one Eiffel Tower in the world so you should use a specific article before it
    . But the most important ____?________ is (you need to add a word here)
    . its fabulous place (is there only one fabulous place to visit or are there many?)
    . a heart of Europe (how many hearts does Europe have? should you use a specific article here?)
    . Let's go to visit (omit a word)

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